Letter Writing
Two Types of Letters
Written communication is divided into two broad categories:
Formal Letters
Written to people you do not know personally, or in a professional context. Used for: job applications, complaints, official requests, letters to organisations, reference letters.
Informal Letters
Written to friends and family. Used for: personal updates, invitations, thank-you notes, keeping in touch.
The audience and purpose determine which style you use.
Key Terms
| Term | Meaning |
|---|---|
| Salutation | The greeting (e.g. Dear Mr Smith,) |
| Closing / Valediction | The sign-off (e.g. Yours sincerely,) |
| Recipient | The person receiving the letter |
| Formal tone | Professional, polite, impersonal |
| Informal tone | Casual, warm, personal |
| Contraction | A shortened form (e.g. I am β I'm) β avoided in formal letters |
Formal Letter Layout
[Your address β top right]
[Date β below your address]
[Recipient's name and address β left side]
Dear Mr / Ms [Surname], β if you know the name
Dear Sir or Madam, β if you do not know the name
[Paragraph 1 β state the purpose of your letter clearly]
[Paragraph 2 β provide supporting details, explanation, or evidence]
[Paragraph 3 β state what action you expect or what happens next]
Yours sincerely, β used when you know the recipient's name
Yours faithfully, β used when you wrote "Dear Sir or Madam"
[Your handwritten signature]
[Your printed full name]
The sincerely / faithfully rule:
- Know the name = Yours sincerely
- Do not know the name = Yours faithfully
Language in Formal Letters
- Use polite, professional language throughout
- Avoid contractions β write "I am" not "I'm," "I would" not "I'd"
- Avoid slang, colloquialisms, and emotional outbursts
- Be clear and concise β state your purpose in the opening paragraph
- Use a measured, respectful tone even in complaint letters
Formal phrases to use:
- I am writing to enquire about...
- I would be grateful if you could...
- I look forward to hearing from you.
- Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information.
Informal Letter Layout
Your address and date still appear, but the tone is relaxed and personal:
[Your address β top right]
[Date]
Dear [First name],
[Opening β ask how they are / reference something personal]
[Body β share news, ask questions, tell stories]
[Closing β wrap up warmly]
Best wishes / Love / Take care / See you soon,
[Your first name]
Types of Formal Letters
Letter of Complaint
- State the problem clearly in the first paragraph
- Give specific details: dates, reference numbers, product names
- Be firm but polite β do not use rude or aggressive language
- State clearly what resolution you expect
Letter of Application
- State the position you are applying for and where you saw it advertised
- Highlight relevant skills and experience
- Express enthusiasm for the role
- Refer to your attached CV or portfolio
Letter of Request
- Clearly state what you are requesting and why
- Explain the benefit or necessity
- Thank the recipient for their time and consideration
Emails
Emails follow similar conventions to letters:
- Subject line: Keep it short and descriptive (e.g. Enquiry about Year 10 Work Experience)
- Formal emails: Use formal salutations, avoid slang, proofread carefully
- Informal emails: More casual, but still clear and organised
- Always include a professional email signature for formal correspondence
Worked Example
Opening of a formal complaint letter:
Dear Ms Williams,
I am writing to express my concern regarding the damage I discovered to my order (Reference: 1234-XY), which was delivered on 15 January 2026. When I opened the package, I found that the item was cracked and therefore unusable.
I would be grateful if you could arrange for a replacement to be sent at your earliest convenience.
This opening: states the purpose immediately, includes specific details, and uses a polite but clear tone.
Common Mistakes
- Mixing sincerely/faithfully: Always check whether you used the recipient's name in the salutation.
- Contractions in formal letters: "I'm" and "you're" are too informal β always expand them.
- Vague complaint letters: Always include specific details β dates, order numbers, descriptions.
- Missing your address: Even in emails, ensure the recipient knows who you are and how to contact you.
- Starting every paragraph with "I": Vary your sentence openings for a more sophisticated style.
Tips and Tricks
- Plan before you write: List the key points you want to make, then put them in logical order.
- One idea per paragraph: Each paragraph should focus on a single point.
- Proofread carefully: Errors in a formal letter undermine your credibility.
- Read your letter aloud to catch awkward phrasing before sending.
- For complaint letters, keep copies of all correspondence in case you need to escalate the matter.